Monday, August 4, 2008

The Lottery

Hesitantly, Mrs. Hutchinson approached the box. (Adverb out of order)


Beginning the unveiling, the people were energized about who was going to be it. (Participial Phrase)

Eager about her friend, a girl whispered best for her friend. (Gerund-Object of Preposition)


Rushing, Mr. Summers wanted to get it over with. (Participial Phrase)

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